by *Charisma* Jan 18, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
first love
First love |
Very cute love poem.. again its got perfect flow and amazing rhyme ... nice job! :) |
by debbylyn
Very romantic sentiments in this piece. Good overall...nicely done once again. 5/5 |
AMAZING!! i loved it!!!! ur an awesome writer!! dont let anyone tell u different!!!! |
Wow. This is amazing. I absolutely love it. It flowed really well. & The rhyming was great. A lot of emotion in this. & It was just so beautiful. Amazing job. Keep it up, Hun. |
by lil swimmer
This is real sweat! |