Nice. Real niceeeeeeeeeeeeee""

I wish I could relate but sadly, I can't anymore. Anyways, this poem was great and the rhyming and flow were pefect!
xoxo

Really good job, Charisma....b/c I know your situation I know how personal this is to yah and you did a great job expressing that. Keep it up! :)
~Midnight Sun

Nice rhythm and rhyme. A sweet love story. I don't know why you got down voted, I give you a 5/5. I wish when people did give a low score, they would post their critique in the comment box. Oh..they probably didn't have one lol!

This is real sweat!

Wow. This is amazing. I absolutely love it. It flowed really well. & The rhyming was great. A lot of emotion in this. & It was just so beautiful. Amazing job. Keep it up, Hun.

Bri.x

AMAZING!! i loved it!!!! ur an awesome writer!! dont let anyone tell u different!!!!
amanda

Very romantic sentiments in this piece. Good overall...nicely done once again. 5/5

Very cute love poem.. again its got perfect flow and amazing rhyme ... nice job! :)