FiNaL gOoDbYe

by CaptainTyingKnots   Jan 18, 2007


So many thoughts go through my head
So many people wish me dead
So many times that I try
To say my last, my final good-bye

The tears pour down
And all around
Inside my head
I hear what all of them have said

I know this will be the last
That I ever have to where a mask
I pick up the gun
To finish what you’ve begun

Finish the pain
And all that remains
I’m saying good-bye
This is the time, that I must die

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  • 15 years ago

    by BitterXSweetness

    Wow. I really liked this poem. It's sad but at the same time, 2 a point it tells a story. It's good. I wrote a poem really close 2 this, it's called "Last Goodbye", and as I was reading this, it reminded me of my poem. lol I guess great minds think alike huh? lol =P The only thing that I would suggest is u jsut fix ur spelling. A couple of words were spelled wrong. But other than that, it was really good.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Such a stable structure and such good wording . Your rhymes are fantastic . The only suggestion I have is to take the caps out of the title . 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Iris

    Agreed!! very deep!

  • 17 years ago

    by AKASHA

    I like this one. its deep. :)

    mmcl

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