I like this one. its deep. :)

mmcl

Agreed!! very deep!

Such a stable structure and such good wording . Your rhymes are fantastic . The only suggestion I have is to take the caps out of the title . 5/5

Wow. I really liked this poem. It's sad but at the same time, 2 a point it tells a story. It's good. I wrote a poem really close 2 this, it's called "Last Goodbye", and as I was reading this, it reminded me of my poem. lol I guess great minds think alike huh? lol =P The only thing that I would suggest is u jsut fix ur spelling. A couple of words were spelled wrong. But other than that, it was really good.