Great Poem.

One word. Wonderful.
Well written, loved it. :]

Another innocent poem! Please keep up the good work! :] 5/5

Good job, a don't think I could write about nature and make it seem that good!

Naima

This is nice!! Where was this talent in your other poems? Your word choice was massively improved since the other poems I read!

You were a little repetitive still. But much better.

5/5

I loved this poem! Nature poems are particularly good to write, because they can show a lot. A brilliant piece, keep it up :D
Oh, one thing. In this part:

What had destroyed,
has now brought live

You might want to change "live" to "life"

5/5!!
Hatori

Ah, what a wonderful poem this is!
I favored nature poems above all else on this site. This was quite well-written, I must say.
"Growing on a stone,
cracked with age,
your seed was planted.
By natures own designs,"
-- I love those lines. Especially the line, "By nature's own designs," it was rather creative, by the way.
Great job.

This is a good poem...not as good as alot of your others...but good none the less. 3/5...i like your other ones better

This IS your BEST! I loved it. :D They just keep getting better and better as I go!
First I was like.. I LOVE THIS STANZA ( for the first ) then I was like NO THIS ONE! Lol. You did a great job, keep it up hun. I think you're a nature kinda poet. :D

YOu good at writting nature poems. I think this well written, and the word choice is vivid. Great job 5/5

This is not QUITE an "Oh, damn" poem, but it is certainly up there. This is DEFINATELY your best I've read so far, and I believe I'd read 8. Nicely, nicely done.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5