Comments : Smile My Love

  • 17 years ago

    by Lu

    Throw some cold water in my face and coooooool me down. There be fire coming from this piece Bill .....whoooohooo

    Very fitting title Bill for a can see a big ole smile for sure.

    Awesome write, my friend.

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    What a beautiiful poem. What a lucky lady to have someone to write these words for her. Excellent job!

  • 17 years ago

    by ThugPoet

    Hello my friend Bill hehe you remember me? This was a really good poem, hehe seems you and your wife enjoy one another which is great. This poem really brings out the kiddish joy in you that you get from being with your wife which is too COOL, stay YOUNG BILL. Theres a saying in India hehe "Age is like a gold ring on the finger. Its the finger that gets old not the ring. Your only as old as you feel, my friend."
    Hehe take care.. I respect your opinion alot so when u find time... plz stop by my poems =)
    love,
    -Thuggy