I THINK I FOUND IT OUT.
I think the hidden message is that..
Someone lied to someone, then found out that.. the person they lied to lied to them. Yet, more than just one lie.. And, that person is falling apart.

AM I RIGHT?
Gosh, i love these kind of poems.
i loved it!!!
:] 5/5 babe.

Ummmmmm.
LET ME READ IT ONE MORE TIME.
zomgggggggggggg
sdlgj;asdgjas;dgjsgjdas;djgsadgj
OKAY THIS IS WAY OUT THERE BUT...
your sure you will find
everything i reveal
the stories are told
you're living in them now?
IS THAT IT?
ZOMG.

Lies The answers.
And the real truth.
Deciet will be no longer Shown.

That is what I got for the hidden message.. Lol. I could be wrong, good chance of that one. ANYWAY.

The emotion was very well thought out as was the depth. Even though I don't normally like poems that don't have flow, this one.. Just made me keep reading. I read it like five timesssss! Great job, really. :] xo.

LOL!
Such a clever poem! I found the message. It's so sweet. I don't know which category is should go in. But if it leans more towards romance, like the message (?) then you should it it in love poems -> i love you. This is amazing. You deserve a 5/5

So I was really enjoying the poem until this last part about the hidden message, which confused me haha. That aside, this poem is excellent work and think the meaning is really clear and strong. Also, I don't think there's a category thats appropriate for this which is unfortunate because sometimes our poems don't even fall under the categories here. Great job though and keep up the good work! Remember to spell check! :)

~jas~

I thought this was well done! I like how you have a hidden message within the poem, however I couldn't find it. I found how some words are capitalized but couldn't really decipher. Anyway, I like the structure and the message! Hmm..I'm still thinking about that hidden message..haha! I like this kind of poems! It always leaves you thinking. Great job!
5/5

Hmm...
I got that someone had lied to someone and he person that had lied to them was very upset, and falling apart because of it?
I think it should stay in this category.
I liked the wording you used in this, the first stanza really hooked me.
My other favourite part was the imagery used and I thought it flowed nicely.

Well done! I really enjoyed reading this one 5/5

it should go under sad poems

LOve the POem its AcE !!!!

Loved it!!! really good.

The fact it has a "hidden message" is just making me look for that rather than actually understanding the poem.
The message I got was from the clue you gave at the bottom...it's the first word of every line...yes? lol.
Ok the poem was good, it was interesting. Certainly made the reader think.
I can see one error though... for the message you obviously need the first word of the second line to be "your"...but if you read it with the line "your sure you will find" it doesn't make sense, it should be "you're," that's all.
Thanks for sharing.

Omg that's so awesome!!!! i would've never even known!!!!!!!!!! wow that was gooooooooooood!! sry i took so long to get back, great job though 5/5

This poem is AMAZING!!!!!

Wow. great poem. it was amazing!!! and i love the hidden message. i think theres a name when you do something like that but im not to sure what it is.. lol. anywhooo thanks so much for your comment your the first person on this site to actually critique my poems. i appretiate it and im going to try to fix it up. and great job!!!

Under your lies and deciet is everything you have hidden from me, behind the walls stacked with fantasies lies your amazing reality.

I love this poem. It's got a unique personality, especially with the hidden message. Great write!!!!

5/5

marcella

Really really good poem!

i think the hidden message is that someone lied to someone else... and the person is hurt...

this is a really good poem... for the category i dont really know where u should put it...

I loved this.. It was so deep & powerful. I love how you had a hidden message.. & I think I found it. ?

Underneath your lies and deceit is everything you have hidden from me, behind the walls stacked with fantasies lies your amazing reality.

I'm pretty sure that's it. And I e f f i n' love that.. It's so beautiful! Your wording was really good. & everything flowed pretty well.

Again: The message was amazing.

Amazing how you can survive, for
Reality has begun to fall.

^ I love these two lines.. So powerful & beautiful.

Bri x