This is REALLY good! I love poems that I can relate to and I loved your analogies (sp?lol)...great job! I'm looking forward to reading more and you're already on my favorites list, :)!
~Midnight Sun

Very nice descriptions. I like how you make him your everything. Good job, and I'm glad you are on the site!
Charisma*

I like this poem a lot. I know how you feel.
Great.

This is real good, seriously! Im gonna check out the rest of your stuff.

Pretty and sweet. (-winces- What a waste of a comment...)

Hey I like this alot because you really did something different.