Missing u

by Kaila   Jan 19, 2007


Dark brown eyes
stare at me deep
like stars in the sky
on a long octobers week
love in your smile
brightness in your eyes
with you i feel special maybe forever
or only awhile
please dont say its over
because then i will feel week and
if you tell me goodbye
my eyes will start to leak

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    This is short and sweet. I absolutely loved it. It could use a bit more lines, but it's really god. Great job. 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    Make the u you.
    capitalize your I's.

    other than that amazing, cute, short poem.
    (:
    keep it up dear.

  • 17 years ago

    by The Lonely Rose

    Awww....very sad...liked it very much short simple...awsomer =)

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Awww that was so cute..5/5 keep it up

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