Blue eyed girl

by Kaila   Jan 19, 2007


Blue eyed girl
Sitting in the window pane
Never new what love was
Isnâ??t that a shame
Sheâ??d cry all night
Then sob all day
Wishing to find
A happy home
One which she would stay
But there were no good things to come
For this poor little girl
All she wanted was
Pure love
So one day she said
Iâ??m never doing this againâ?¦
She walked out the door
Sun shining in her face
One day sheâ??ll find
Her very own place
But for now
All she can say is
Someday Iâ??ll find my own way

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alexandra Jade Brewer

    Great job, only thing is that the weird things in the poem sorta ruin it. Its very well written... just I would take them out of the poem they will leave a better impression.

  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    Oh, so sad poem. =[

    It's really good though. Great job! 5/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Oooh lala.
    feels like this poem is about moi :)
    and i think i mighta found my place.
    anyways if this is about you....i hope you will to.
    wish you bestssss of luck.
    really a wonderful poem
    ***** 5stars

  • 17 years ago

    by Afraid of the Dark

    I especially loved the flow and that last line. . . often its that last line that does it for me in poem. . .

    laura
    x

  • 17 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    This poem was very well written everything flowed 5/5

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