Very strong poem!
And very refreshing to read, at least for me,
i can definitly relate to this one hun! it's excellent.
Full of passion!
Well done
5/5
*gem*

I REALLY ´loved this one..
I've had somehow same situation with my friend..

Excellend job. 5/5

Keep it up nd Take care!

I can feel ur anger here very good use of emotions just fix the A thingys again and it will b another awsome poem but in my oppion make it a lil longer give more details...=)

Alot of anger throughout this poem which is great it was so strong you really need to edit those little A things though because it throws the reader off track. Good job with htis though~mel

Well one things for sure in this poem.. theres a lot of hate! such strong anger that really and maybe literally burst out through the words.. it really captured me and even made me feel a bit uneasy.. cause i was imagining someone actually say this to my face.. so you did a good job here.. direct, strong and true..

~angel~

Wow, this is such a good poem filled with anger. Great job! 5//5

*Cindy*