Comments : Insanity

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "Confusion has made me unaware
    Of which way I am supposed to turn"

    Excellent phrases!
    How can this not have comments or votes yet?
    I think it's one of your best
    5/5
    *gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Crying My Angry Tears

    Awesome you did really well at conveying the confusion idea during stanza 2, great description makes it really easy to understand.
    Love it, I think quite a few people can relate to exactly what this poem's saying.

    Thanks for commenting on my poem.
    xxx Olivia

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    I'm supposed to give you three comments because of coming in third in my contest but I've commented on all but two, lol.
    But this poem truly is amazing. Once again I just love your style! It's so unique and knowing you, it fits you perfectly. You are so much deeper than I could ever hope to be. Amazing job, especially the last stanza. :)
    ~Midnight Sun