Comments : Hero

  • 17 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Nice work! sounds good!

    *^^nessa^^*

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Heehee, this sounded very much like superman! But I totally loved it! It was very heroic (well, duh! It's called HERO! LOL!) Anyways, you did a great job with this. Keep it up! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by tearstainedlies

    Thanks for the comment well this is an amazing poem dont stop writing... it's way sweet!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    I enjoyed this one, David. It was beautiful. We could all use a hero! I like the way you write.
    5/5 always your favorite friend
    Kate~

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Short but sweet and very cute!!!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by FrozenTearsBleed

    Cute poem, very nice. 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Very sweet write!!...Kp up the good wrk!!...though short..it was penned in a simple yet beautiful way!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A lovely write!! wonderfully written, i love the topic u chose it's quite different.

    bloodied and broken i fight on
    i'll never give up till evil is gone

    those lines are my favorite!! keep up the good work yer a lovely poet!! =]