Dear Mom

by The Lonely Rose   Jan 19, 2007


Hey Mom,

Aren't we suppose to be close?
Why don't you pay attention to me?
Can't you see the reason why I'm on the computer all the times?
I just want a person to talk to.
Some one that can bring up a conversation?
I am even more closer to Dad because I can talk to him more about more normal stuff than you.
You seem so stiff.
You never tell me anything unless i need to know.
When we talk all you say is things i need to do better or when just telling me what to do.
Even my brother said that you don't pay or gives us attention at all.
Plus your too hard on my sister too.
Seems like you just want clones.
Clones of you.
Perfectionist
Does everything correctly
But we are our own selves
Dad always says that you are may talk harshly but you mean well..
But sometimes you are a little to harsh.
I was once your clone when i was little but now i have grown to be my own person.
Now your on my case about every single thing.
You always complain why i am on the computer a lot it's because i am so locked up on my problems and when i try to tell you,
You look feels like your pressuring me.
You hardly smile anymore.
You turned hardcore.
I love you mom but you've changed..

Love,
~*Jazzy~*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole

    Interesting poem. 5/5. ur emtoins agin are strong. i really truly hope things improve for u

  • 17 years ago

    by kaiLa

    Dang! this is what i feel about my mom... EXACTLY how i feel and maybe more...

    i can only do too much that she asks... and its sucks that i feel so sad when i'm around her...

    anyways, really great poem!!!
    5/5

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