The Unrequited Lover

by omen   Jan 19, 2007


The unrequited lover
dosn't give a shit
her gave and he gave
but never got abit
there's no use to bleed
so stop the flow
he's given up now
he's going home

hey devil, come collect your toll
I've made my bed, and i've dug this hole
can't you see, that i am suffering?
no you can't, no one can see

i gave you all of my soul
i've waited around, but now time to fold
the truth is realised, too late
but im now off to meet my fate
so goodbye to you for now
im off to find, what i've never found

all my suffering
and my pain
i withstood
for you to remain
but you left me
oh so cold
and you left me
with this hole

the unrequited lover
dosn't give a shit
i gave and i gave
but never got a bit
there's no use to bleed
so stop the flow
I've given up now
I'm going home

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  • 17 years ago

    by Shae

    Great poem. Loved the emotion and depth.
    "The truth is realized too late"
    Wow...How true!! Great poems. I'll have to check more out later. 5/5

    ~Shae

  • 17 years ago

    by shawn

    Good poem, it showed great emotion. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow. I thought that this poem was amazing.

    I'll admit, I am not one for swears in a poem, but I felt that they were appropriate [I have swears in only 1 of my poems & it works so hey I can't be critical on that!]

    great job on the poem. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by BrixGoesxRawr

    Wow, This was really good! It flowed wonderfully & it was so sad, yet beautifully written.

    I loved it.x

    I'm off to find, what Iâ??ve never found

    ^ That needs to be fixed. Lol.

    I loved the repitition of the first & last stanza. It really brought the whole poem together. I can relate to this. Amazing job. Keep it up.

    Bri.x

  • 17 years ago

    by Shad0w0faPh30n1x

    Another good poem man, check the third stanza last sentence, that stuff shouldnt be in there, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

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