Another good poem man, check the third stanza last sentence, that stuff shouldnt be in there, i give it a 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Wow, This was really good! It flowed wonderfully & it was so sad, yet beautifully written.

I loved it.x

I'm off to find, what Iâ??ve never found

^ That needs to be fixed. Lol.

I loved the repitition of the first & last stanza. It really brought the whole poem together. I can relate to this. Amazing job. Keep it up.

Bri.x

Wow. I thought that this poem was amazing.

I'll admit, I am not one for swears in a poem, but I felt that they were appropriate [I have swears in only 1 of my poems & it works so hey I can't be critical on that!]

great job on the poem. 5/5

Good poem, it showed great emotion. 5/5

Great poem. Loved the emotion and depth.
"The truth is realized too late"
Wow...How true!! Great poems. I'll have to check more out later. 5/5

~Shae