Comments : Unimaginable Existence

  • 17 years ago

    by Jeffrey

    This just caught me so off guard jess. I should never underestimate what you are capable of.

    Light that can produce skies of any hue
    Waters of an unimaginable blue

    Mmm, well isn't that a pretty little line. that whole first stanza, i love it, it beautifully portrays some of the wonders that exist. these things that are so intricate and complex,yet man had no part in making.

    the second stanza, bit preachy, hehe :]. still nice flow, and the whole uplifting positive warm feel it sends, reminds me of you.

    From solitude in creation we become aware
    An unimaginable existence is unconditionally there

    effin A jess. look forward to talking to you about it later.