Wow an impressing story and really creative style=a good poem,nothing to say another word,5/5

I absolutely love how you have like a trilogy of poems--thats awesome. Its like seeing what happens after another poem. I love it! Excellent job!

I loved this one. you have done a very good job at keeping my attention throughout the entire poem, and with writing skills as yours you will get far. great! 5/5

Well i finally got around to reading it lol
I like these poems can't wait to read the next one!

Wow thats horrible (What happened not the poem). After everything that this poor girl went through then to think that she might be pregnant thats the worst thing in the world. not to bad so far. can't waite to see what happens in the next one.