Reading this was like seeing the movie and everything i know about this story and bringing it back again. u've really captured this well done

Nice one--it says the story and it's perfect with ryhmes!!--nice job!--i'could've taken a whole year doing dis lol--

I love it, you can write the whole story just in this poem wich is amazing, I wouldnt have done this as good as you even if I wanted to x 5/5