Omg that was so good. kinda depressing but it has a lot of emotion in it which is good. ;) nice job and keeeeep it up!!!!!!!

That was really good. It has plenty of emotion in it, tells a good story and has a strong ending. The flow was great with the smaller stanzas put inbetween. Great poem, yet again. =] 5/5

Tammie

I enjoyed this poem. i felt like i could relate to you in the writing, it was such a wonderful story.

the only thing about it, is i felt that this part,

"With a sickly sinister grin on my drooping face
Surrounded by this dull, macabre style place"

was somewhat out of place. i felt it was a little wordy, nontheless, i enjoyed your poem. [:

That was really good, i love that last line, perfect quote! good writing 5/5

That was really good, i love that last line, perfect quote! good writing 5/5

Wow this is really deep. Feelings just shout from this piece. Great job!Take Care Cindy

This is really deep and has LOTS of emotions... but im not gunna lie, it kinda makes me want to kill myself.