by Teria Jan 19, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Breathless & Broken. |
by donna
This was very sad... It flowed nicely and I really enjoyed the suspense whilst reading this piece... Beautifully written... Well done 5/5 xx |
Ahh.. scary and sad.. but WOAH what a poem.. really realy great word choice.. and the flow. is flawless! spectacular imagery.. and very strong emotions.. perfect poem |
by Jenni Marie
''Now, I think this is where I'll die. |
by Tricky Daze
I especially liked that |