I especially liked that

I can only imagine what they went through.
And, what he's going to actually do.
He's abandoned me in this lonely basement.
With dirt filled cracks along the cement.

so good work 5/5

''Now, I think this is where I'll die.
To escape, why even try?
He'll just end my life sooner than expected.
Imagine the disease that have affected.
My soul, My life suddenly stolen.
Left me alone, breathless & broken.''

WOW.

That stanza was brilliant!
It had huge impact, and I thought it was really powerful.
This is my favourite of your's so far, everything about this poem is perfect!

Ahh.. scary and sad.. but WOAH what a poem.. really realy great word choice.. and the flow. is flawless! spectacular imagery.. and very strong emotions.. perfect poem

This was very sad... It flowed nicely and I really enjoyed the suspense whilst reading this piece... Beautifully written... Well done 5/5 xx