This poem was like it was written for me. Wow! Your words flow through this write like a heavenly hymn. Hope to see more of your work.

Sad and beautiful. Speaks to those who have a loved one who has passed on....very nice.

Beautifully penned. This piece pours with emotion. This is a heartfelt piece. EXCELLENT JOB!!

This is simply outstanding, wonder where u hv been for so long...great write indeed
keep writing dear

all the best and take care

The last four lines are so beautiful...

Awwwwwwwww.........!!! (High pitch) This is really awesome! My friend and I thought it was really great! Hope to see more of your work=)

BRILLIENT POEM LIKE IT ALOT! pls comment on mine. thanks tc
WILD ROSE

You have an amazing vocabulary...

Wow. That was really beautiful. I loved the rhyme, the words, the pictures you painted. It was amazing!

Astryd

I knew you would come through....
another beautifully worded write....
You can't hide a good heart for long...
Blazing through with light....
Excellent write