This is really good. Some advice ... tell him how you feel. The wost thing that could happen is him telling you that he likes you only as a friend. And in that case it would hurt but it wouldnt hurt as bad as never knowing what could of been because you were to scared to tell him how you felt. Dont let the good things in life pass you by for someone els to have. Grab hem while you can. Best of luck
Great poem ... loved it
Sunshine

YOU are a very good poet. I bet if you take Sunshines advice It will all be better!!
~Jessie~

YOU are a very good poet. I bet if you take Sunshines advice It will all be better!!
~Jessie~

Wow, I can really feel the emotion springing forth from this write. Very nice job. *5/5

Hey I agree with that last part. I fell in love with someone and I had to hide it from him. I get this poem a lot, great wording. Keep It Up!!!

Very good, every now and then i like a good sappy love poem. it makes me in the mood of writing my war poems.

Mint 10/10 and YOUR bett then ME ok...

Hmmm. Great Poem sweetheart. Keep on writing. Thank you for the comment.

Wow. so emotional. keep writing, you have a knack for this stuff.