Hey thats pretty good for a 5 minutes work..lol..I like it...good job

~*~Elisha~*~

Hmmm i like but i would like to see what thoughts you come up with for a happy poem, just would be interresting. keep it up

Its a lovely poem it actually reminds me of my dad (an evil man) i cant wait to read what you think of next.
you are a very talented writer,
i cam tell you write from the heart, the way you describe everything.
thank you for the comment hun. 5/5
xxtake carexx