Vampire

by Never URs   Jan 19, 2007


The feeling of death,
lingers in the midst.
It circles around and fills the air.
The gaping wound,
upon my heart.
Leaves internal scars,
and external marks.
The shadows are lower,
but not withdrawn.
And her whole body shakes,
with violent quivers.
Her hungry soul marches,
for the last of her thirst.
While sucking blood as I watch,
she digs lower and lower.
And asks the victim to stay,
she hangs her head low.
And gnashes her lips.
she looks around solely.
But no ones in sight,
I'm hidden deep,
within the night.
She can't see me but I can see her,
blood covers her body,
and soaks through her shirt.

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  • 17 years ago

    by lil miss music

    Thats dark. i like a lot. write more.

  • 17 years ago

    by Kelsey

    I loved this poem.Keep up the great work.And thank you for commenting on my poem Someone Who.I don't get comments very often anymore.Bye.

    ~Kelsey Marie~

  • 17 years ago

    by *~Broken_Seraph~*

    THIS IS ANOTHER AWESOME ONE!!! I LOVE THE VAMPYRIC IMAGERY!! KEEP IT UP! =D

  • 17 years ago

    by beav

    Really good poem! nice visual words. enjoyed reading this! fabulous job! thanks for the great comment! this is the first, but i look forward to reading all your poems. :)

  • 17 years ago

    by onyx stone

    WOW!!! Ur amazing lol.... u have talent too and thanks for commenting on my poem... lol great ne way

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