Wow, this poem is amazing. im seriously crying right now. i started crying after the first line, which is weird b/c i don't usually cry (especially not that easily). there's so much emotion here, great job! ur an amazing writer, i can't wait to read more of your poems!

Forever*Yours

I put u in my favorites, cause i love this so much...
:-P

Forever*Yours

I liked this. I feel the same way. good stuff. =)

I loved it! Best line was "So here I am drinking away trying
to fill that hole I see no better way."
And it makes it more good that you wrote it that way so it stands out more... nice job!!