When night time comes

by kimara4955   Jan 19, 2007


Night time comes, i still lay awake,
thinking to myself for f**k sake.
why can't i sleep,
am i some kind of freak.
people shout as they don\'t understand me,
i just want to be free.

not yet finished, would love to hear what you guys think,
if you have any questions leave me a comment
thanks. xx

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  • 17 years ago

    by aknives sweet kiss

    Its an awesome poem so far

  • 17 years ago

    by Solus

    Night can be the safest time....and the Terrifying....Very good poem

  • 17 years ago

    by Behind Blue Eyes

    Its a good start! i really wanna read it when your done..so keep me updated!

    ps. thanks for commenting on my poems :]

  • 17 years ago

    by browneyessoul

    I like it, if u even get a chance read one of mine

  • 17 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Great poem lil kimmie keep it up ure exalent at writing poems

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