by BeautifulxMess Jan 20, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I want you to know what it is I feel. |
by DeathlyAmore
Wow. I love the ending. The title did not make sense until the last sentence was read. It seems your heart flows with such ease into words. Rhyming could use a little more effort. But it was a good poem. No doubt. Voted 5/5 |
by Mousie
It was another nice poem, just the flow was off in a few places and you tended to repeat yourself... it was a nice poem still though, it was good. nice job, keep up the work and keep working at it, you have potential |