It was another nice poem, just the flow was off in a few places and you tended to repeat yourself... it was a nice poem still though, it was good. nice job, keep up the work and keep working at it, you have potential

Wow. I love the ending. The title did not make sense until the last sentence was read. It seems your heart flows with such ease into words. Rhyming could use a little more effort. But it was a good poem. No doubt. Voted 5/5

Ps: In the ending of your poem. it says "Out love with endure" Change 'Out' to 'our'