Wow... this was good! my favorite line was:
"My eternal star of faith and hope"

its really pretty! would you mind if i used it in one of my poems?

5/5
Allanah

Glamour and beauty flow from your written word. Also a sense of warmth, and beauty. Images spring into the mind, and emotions flow easily when this piece is read. I liked your form, and how you repeated these two lines

You are my shining star of light
My eternal star of faith and hope

I also, simply liked those lines. They hold an almost magical effect. Wonderful work. I look forward to reading more of your poems soon. Best wishes and blessed be.