Letting Go

by Rona   Jan 20, 2007


I've held on long enough,
It is time to let go.
My heart has been broken,
But it just doesn't show.

My hands are bleeding,
From holding on so tight.
Letting go is most painful,
Though I know it's only right.

I've grown attached
And that was a mistake.
My heart so fragile,
Was not yours to break.

Your eyes have deceived me.
It wasn't filled with passion,
Nor with the slightest inkling
Of your deepest compassion.

So I believe it is time,
Time to finally let go.
My love has been forsaken,
And that I truly know.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    Especially this stanzas i really liked

    Your eyes have deceived me.
    It wasn't filled with passion,
    Nor with the slightest inkling
    Of your deepest compassion

    good job,keep it up 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    I love this. A bittersweet and emotion filled write. It has a wonderful flow, and isn't too long, but isn't too horribly short either. Overall spectacular. *5/5
    I particularly liked these lines. It sums the idea up pretty well in my opinion.'

    "My hands are bleeding,
    From holding on so tight.
    Letting go is most painful,
    Though I know it's only right."

  • 17 years ago

    by lala

    Wow. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by MissGem

    I really liked this poem, your good!
    Keep it up XxX

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    WOW I like it so much Great piece every lines are filled with mixed emotions and are powerful that it speak the feeling that u really want to tell... KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

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