by ForeverYoung Jan 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
The night, the day, the hour unknown. |
by Marc Ortiz
It was simple but still a great poem, I really like the way you rhymed words, I like your style in writing :) please write more ^_^ |
I love this poem!! One of my favorites of yours... I just love the way you wrote it... it has a lot of meaning. Take care :-) |
by dora
This poem was soo good. i loved the strucutre and the wording was great. very powerful also. good job writing it. xx |
by amoxi
This poem was wonderful it was very well written and it said everything, i dont know what else to say except it was excellent 5/5 |
by Kristina
Amazing! wow i've never seen a poem like this before! you did such a good job on it. the rhymes were really good!! and i liked the overall idea of the poem! 5/5 |