Again keep writting

Wow.. i love this poem.. if can be metaphorical as well as just about a house.. the flow is very nice.. and that fact that it doesnt rhyme adds a nice touch.. it helps your words get the foscus and not the rhyme... amazing job!

I liked that one...although short, you got the point across, and that little memo you wrote at the bottom helped see the image more clearly..very nice. 5/5

I just wish it were longer cuz its full of emotion 5/5 though
*kaila*