I liked this poem a lot. =]
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As you press your cheek close to my breast.
So you can hear my heart thunder inside my chest.
My heart eats wildly for you my dear.
Enchantingly, hauntingly only for you to hear.
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^^ Those are my fave stanzas. Well the whole poem was good but those just stood out. One thing though...you might want to change 'my heart -eats-' to 'beats'. Heh. 5/5 Take care.

-` Liz

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