by lala Jan 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
As I lay in the hospital |
by lala
Thank you so much ^^ |
by Isabelle
Omg, this was amazing. I really the feelings in it. It had wonderful phrasing, and collection of words. |
by Michelle
I really like it. You used a lot of graphic imagery to display the dark situation, and the second stanza did a really good job of pulling together the horror and pain of the event. |
Wow really good poem! love the endin! |
Loved your choice of words! Lovely read, great write, amazing poem. Keep it up ^_^ |