This is really a great poem written nicely. keep up the great job,

Wow, this one's great!!

Nice poem it flowed really nicely except for this couple of lines..
"The torrent of water
Violent like thunder"

all i thought you needed was to put a the for it so it read like this The torrent of the water
Violent like the thunder just my personal opinion haha well its really nice good job :D

xx