Another very good poem, Cindy.
So much emotion and love portrayed.
keep up the beautiful writes
your friend, Tara-Kay

I love this. even though i am trying to be happy right now i always go back to the sad poems. wow i love your work and am planning on reading more of your poems. keep it up 5//5. :)
--tara

Very beautiful, but sad. A lasting love never dies in spirit, and you are proof of that! Wonderful job once again!

Very beautiful, as said...i don't feel sad
cos i know this love will find its way....
one day...

poem is another 10.

I know who inspired this. The man was one of the most special people any one could have ever had the pleasure of meeting. He loved unconditionally and devoted his life to his family. A wonderful husband, father, brother, uncle, inlaw, caretaker, laborer, friend and so much more. We can still feel him here in our hearts and his memory brings such joy and sorrow. missing him. Thank you for sharing such heartfelt emotion! 5/5 ( more if I could :) )

Aw.. this is soo happy in the beginng and then sad.. it was totally unexpected.. but thats a good thing.. i like how it came as a shock.. the flow was perfect and the rhyming as well... spectacular write!

This makes me cry so much keep it up all your poems are works of art

Wish you all the happiness you can find. nice write 5/5

It is nice to see that im not the only hopelessly romantic girl out there wanting a guy that can give us what we need!!! There aint that many out there! Great job.

So many wonderful comments that you deserve Cindy....this is a beautiful poem.....as far as I am concerned it is
another.........10.

I loved this!!
It's one of my favourites of your's.
I think everything about this poem is absolutely perfect.

LOL. I am laughing because there's just sometimg you say in your poems that I read and say " oh me too!! " it seems like the love you had was similar to mine and also the loss of it. you write amazingly x thank you xx