This really came from deep inside your heart.
This was a very emotional piece, i enjoyed reading this,
Take care,
Your friend, Tara-Kay

Hey Cindy.

Thanx for commenting on my poems.

So I thought I'd return the favor.

I loved this poem. You could really feel the pain. I enjoyed reading it.

Very nice work.

keep it up.

TaWlIa

Poignant and gut wrenching look at pain. One can not imagine what it must be like! Glad you have found an outlet in verse! Nice write!

Too many of who we know and love suffer pain...this is why it hurts us as well...I would rather not look at pain
in anyone....but we all suffer in this life.... I will not vote on pain but will hold you in my prayers.

Very sad and powerful write here. One can never know the pain of another and how deep it is felt. You have an emotional portrayal here.

Another really great one.. short with simple words but still lets out a really strong emotion.. great description.. i really like this poem

This is a great poem which is written greatly. keep up the great work.

I`m not too good at critisizing whats good or not right about a poem,I read for the emotion of it ,In this I feel your pain so strongly that it makes my heart ache for you , I think thats a sure sign of a good write. It makes the reader feel!

Great last stanza, it captures the moment so well.

Awww moving

This poem was amazing. so well written...i love it...keep up the great work

This poem was amazing. so well written...i love it...keep up the great work

This poem makes me realise how tru it is!!!!!!!!!! ur last stanza makes me think and it'll stay in my heart foreva you r very talented and you shud keep it up!!!!!!!!!!! The emotion it makes u fell is incredable!!!!! i love it soooooo much!

This was very good. I normally don't like this kind of thing, but this poem was very nice.

THIS IS A VERY DEEP POEM WELL WRITTEN 5/5

Very nice]relates 2 me some

Very dark, very sad.

I feel it... I can relate to it.... Well done. Great poem...

Its nice that words exist so we can use them to express our fellings
great work keep writing

No offense, but i didn't like it