What a mesmerising poem ,almost spellbound by these words .
Neither pain nor tears last long enough to be ended by death. Dont take bad phase of life for granted ,pain is part of life like happiness not life itself. Look beyond your suffering and you will see days getting brighter and beautiful.

Hey!

Beautiful...ur words are so musically wonderful...so much feelings inside of them.

Keep writing these lovely poems, u r really blessed

;)
J

This poem is so beautiful yet so sad. Your pain can be felt in your words. Excellent job! take Care Cindy

Your words written are like a prayer...
so beautiful..and so much meaning and emotion filled in them.
i wud giv it 100/100 this is such a beautiful poem. lovely poem written and i didnt feel like i was wasting my time reading it..instead..i read it over n over again :)
well done :)
n thnx for the nice comments u posted me :)

much lub n regards
sonam

Omg!
u said my words! i dont know why but i can feel ur poem and words and can relate to myself too.

very nice poem! 5/5

luv

Wow great use of words once again. great poem loved it. xx