Who is 1st to comment i believe i am
in your face
another great poem you don't disappoint
5/5 keep up the great work

Grr your poekms make me jealous lol i wish i could write like you *sigh*

My body is covered in scars
my heart grows cold and hard
nothing can erase the harm
that is done in the dark. WOW THESE LINES ARE DEEP EXCELLENT JOB INDIAN(I'll be ur night in shining armor i'll rescue u)

I swear...one of these days I am going to make you and onix sit down and write a mushy love poem or something...you are both decent writers...as good if not better than i...but its always sad...be happy damn it
later ghost:)

-Jason-

Such greatly expressed emotion... You write with such intensity and imagination…Beautifully penned…

my mind gets tired and numb
i search for an exit but theres none
i pray for a savior but theres no one
a dark melody some one hums.

Amazing!