by aknives sweet kiss Jan 20, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
I watch the world go by behind these bars. |
by Sweet lig
Gosh! that was nice thoughts! i enjoyed the story seems not really a sad piece but very dedicated! the message was still powerful! 5/5 |
It was really sad but really great too !!!! i love it 5/5 |
by damont
Wow this is so cool and creative. i get to see through the eyes of a dog which is pretty cool. this poem was excellently put together. i like it, you can relate to things quite well. what happen that made you write this poem? |
by struggling
Awww that was sad but i loved it...it brought a tear to my eyes..Great Job...Keep up the good work...5/5. |
by Rebekah
This is really sad, well written. 5/5 |