Her

by Kaila   Jan 20, 2007


Beautiful smile
Sparkling eyes
I guess know one knows
That shes dying inside
World of hate
Desperation and fear
Everyone\'s ashamed
Even loved ones so dear
She tries to hide it
with a fake smile
She hopes someone will say I love you
Maybe once in awhile
She goes home to a world of dishonesty and lies
But in her heart she feels like she\'s lying inside
Everyone wants to be her
They all want a piece
But no one can compare to her
Cuz she thinks shes a disgrace
If only they knew the real her
would they still wanna be her
and if they knew the truth
would they still be in love with her

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  • 15 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Cuz she thinks shes a disgrace

    *That was the only thing that bothered me. I would just use "cause". Other than that I thought you expressed this girls pain well. The imagery is flawless and makes me feel what she went through. I enjoyed reading this. Very nice work. Nik*

  • 17 years ago

    by Sandra D

    I hope this isn't about you... it probably is, all my poems are (in some way) about me... but this is really sad. i really hope you don't feel this way anymore...
    great job with this!
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by w!th0utyou

    I really like how you end your poems its kind of like a cliff hanger and it leaves people wanting more nice job 5/5 keep up the great work

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Great description here. i liked the way you set it all out and made it.... end the way it did.

    5/5 David

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