Picture In A Frame (Acrostic)

by BECCA lessTHANthree   Jan 20, 2007


Piece of a moment
In a dreary day
Caught in all its beauty
Times passing away
Under the flash
Remembered for good
Everyones frozen, just as they stood

Inside of a picture, behind what looks real
Nobody knows, how they really feel

A beautiful moment is still

Forever it will fade
Remembered still it will be
A moment in life
Misunderstood...
Entangled in reality

****an acrostic poem uses the letters in a topic word to begin each line. all lines of the poem should relate to or describe the topic word

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  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    I loved this poem, it wasn't as good as your other one. And, the word 'still' was overused. BUT, it was a great poem, and is extremely true. I like doing acrostic poems, I'm not that good at them.. But, you are! You've done a great job with all the ones I've read so far.

    :D Keep it up, hun.
    <3 Teria.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this!
    The imagery was perfect and the first few lines had me hooked.
    I thought the whole piece flowed really well.

  • 17 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    DANG. HOW DO YOU EXPECT ME TO PICK THESE TO PIECES WHEN I LOVE YOUR POEMS!!!! THE LAST LINE WAS REALLLLLL NICE.

  • 17 years ago

    by Viola

    Awww i love this poem. it's great! and so true pictures are deaciving... they always look so happy..

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. Interesting point of veiw. I like it. My favoret lines are

    Inside of a picture, behind what looks real
    Nobody knows, how they really feel

    Because it is the truth. I personally don't like having my pic taken. Keep up the great work. 5/5

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