Hi Joe, i was just reading your poem Loving You, all three parts, I thought it was very good, but kind of heartbreaking. Ummm, my question is did this really happen? well bye

Well done! perfect. this one is the one i loved the most! i am so happy now, i got to read this fantastic poem.

thank you so much. for sharing this with everyone. and me.

5/5 David

The use of repetition in your poems is wonderful.
I would have liked a different ending, unless you are thinking of making more.
Other then that it was amazing.
5/5

Great poem just like the others, its a sad and touching poem the wording was good and the emotion was great i loved reading those poems 5/5

--emz--

Awwwww..this is so sad!! i can relate to some parts though. is there gonna be a part 4???? i hope soo..to me it feels like it isnt done yet, theres more left to say!!
well i enjoyed reading your poems!!

Keep it up =n= take care!

Omigosh...juz be strong..is shes really meant for you, she will find the way back to you...but if not, its ok..atleast uve got the chance to love her....tc..

Great poem just like the other ones its a sad and emotional, very emotional just like the others well written i enjoyed reading your poems 5/5

Wow....good but sad....you never really know what life will throw at ya

Ohhhhhh , you have big heart , and the way you try to show us that you love her, but she is not with you, and even you angry that this man break her heart, waw waw , you realy love herrrrr

Love it Caleb H

This part is definitely my favorite so far, as well. :D