Very nice. Your love for your girlfriend really shines in this poem.

Sicne u were nine wow thats tight, this poem had a good flow great feeling, so authentic kep[e it up and PLEASE comment thnxs bro

lissa

Wow, i don't even know what to say this poem was just unbelievable. it was so sweet and this girl is so lucky to have someone who cares this much for her
Great job.

Kris.