"Every day that I see you, not
In tears is how I will be caught
Weeping all the time these days
No more do I see the sun's rays"

Such a heart-wrenching ending stanza.
You really put a lot of emotion into this, despite it not being a personal poem.
Well done indeed
5/5
*Gem*

Absolutely goregous. I adore the last stanza. *5/5!!!