Fading soul

by jason   Jan 21, 2007


Body laid heavily down
arms spread out across the ground
ears stinging with a ringing sound
eyes having one image
that of the blood smeared across the ground

a tear falls from the face in pain
all attempts to move were done in vain
all sanity has gone away
a body left alone in this small place

the vision begins to fade
pain go away
leaving nothing but a thought to say
"its all over today"

body laid heavily on the ground
slips away without a sound
as a tear falls down the face
darkness takes the place

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  • 17 years ago

    by GIRL IN LOVE

    I love this poem, i like your rhymeing alot. 5/5 good job. you feeling know how to express you feeling down on paper.

  • 17 years ago

    by Simply Complex

    ''a tear falls from the face in pain
    all attempts to move were done in vain
    all sanity has gone away
    a body left alone in this small place'' that is a really strong stanza along with ''body laid heavily on the ground
    slips away without a sound
    as a tear falls down the face
    darkness takes the place '' lol again and again WOW keep it up babe.

  • 17 years ago

    by courtz; youliedyoubrokemyheart

    Good poem
    lots of emtions
    love

  • 17 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Wow deep, excellent style...nice authenticity keep it up cant wait to read more, pls comment sum of my stuff thnxs ttyl

    lissa

  • 17 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    I like it well done 5/5

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