by angelina Jan 21, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
She wants to know, |
by ellewen
Haha lol you got one of my old ppoems before i knew what a stanza was. I agree, lol (replying to your comment) I just meant that your lines are short. |
by ellewen
I really like that honestly . Different, but you know that isnt always bad. It looks kind of overwhealming to read because of the distance down the page but your lines are extremely short. Other then that I see no errors. Quite enjoyable. Eccept you are quite repetetive with some words. And you spelled a word wrong on your profile. If you ever want any more comments comment any time. Just NO ONE LINERS. |
by Jenni Marie
''If she can't hear, |
by Cella Bella
Great poem. Some of the rhymes seemed forced but, overall is was a good read. 5/5 |
Nice poem, I like the rhyming. |