When I read the title of this poem it made me curious to what it was about. As I read it this poem described "ME". It really does.....
It's so nicely written
I can connect so much with this poem..

Hmm, I liked this piece except for this part:

"She wants to know,
if he really cares.
Her only foe,
is her scares."

scares? That should be fears I believe. I understand you did it for rhyme's sake... but it just isn't coherent. *4/5

This poem had meaning...although there are a couple words that can be changed up a little bit...but other than tha it was pretty good. i think this stanza was really creative

If she can't hear,
she won't know the truth.
If she can't see,
there is no proof.

i liked that alot..nice poem

I like this poem. but it seemed that at times you were trying so hard to make it rhym that it really didnt "flow." but all in all great job

Nice poem, I like the rhyming.

Great poem. Some of the rhymes seemed forced but, overall is was a good read. 5/5

marcella

''If she can't hear,
she won't know the truth.
If she can't see,
there is no proof.''

I love that stanza!!
I thought some of the rhyming seemed forced but apart from that you really did a wonderful job!

I really like that honestly . Different, but you know that isnt always bad. It looks kind of overwhealming to read because of the distance down the page but your lines are extremely short. Other then that I see no errors. Quite enjoyable. Eccept you are quite repetetive with some words. And you spelled a word wrong on your profile. If you ever want any more comments comment any time. Just NO ONE LINERS.

Haha lol you got one of my old ppoems before i knew what a stanza was. I agree, lol (replying to your comment) I just meant that your lines are short.